A good teacher is like a shining star to students. Miss Li, my senior high school English teacher, is a shining star in my life.

When I began my senior high school years, I had difficulty in learning English. I dared not speak English aloud in public because of my poor pronunciation and intonation. I could not get high marks and my grammar was not right at all. Frustrated and afraid of being laughed at, I never put up my hand to answer questions in English class. When Miss Li found out my situation, she encouraged me and lent me a hand. She patiently taught me English grammar, helped me understand how to write a good sentence,and lent me many English books and magazines, which rapidly improved my English. With her help, I became interested in English and eventually got high marks.

Miss Li, like a shining star, shines in my path of success.

一个好老师对他的学生来说就像一颗闪亮的明星。李老师，我高中时的英语老师，就是我生命中一颗闪亮的新星。

当我开始上高中的时候，我英语学习有困难。因为我可怜的发音和语调我不敢在公开场合开口大声说英语。我拿不到高分，我的语法是不正确的。沮丧和害怕被人嘲笑，我从来没有举手在英语课堂回答提问。李老师发现我的情况后，她鼓励我，帮助我。她耐心地教我英语语法，帮助我了解如何写好句子，还借给我许多英语书和杂志，迅速提高了我的英语。在她的帮助下，我渐渐对英语感兴趣，并最终得到了很高的分数。

李老师，就像一颗闪亮的星照耀着我前进的道路。